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cmd/kubeadm/app/discovery/discovery.go

@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ func For(cfg *kubeadmapi.JoinConfiguration) (*clientcmdapi.Config, error) {
 	}
 
 	// if there are no authentication credentials (nor in the config returned from discovery, nor in the TLSBootstrapToken), fail
-	return nil, errors.New("couldn't find authentication credentials for the TLS boostrap process. Please use Token discovery, a discovery file with embedded authentication credentials or a discovery file without authentication credentials and the TLSBootstrapToken flag")
+	return nil, errors.New("couldn't find authentication credentials for the TLS boostrap process. Please use Token discovery, a discovery file with embedded authentication credentials or a discovery file without authentication credentials but with the TLSBootstrapToken flag")
 }
 
 // DiscoverValidatedKubeConfig returns a validated Config object that specifies where the cluster is and the CA cert to trust

cmd/kubeadm/app/discovery/file/file.go

@@ -53,14 +53,14 @@ func ValidateConfigInfo(config *clientcmdapi.Config, clustername string) (*clien
 
 	var kubeconfig *clientcmdapi.Config
 
-	// If the discovery file config contains a authentication credentials
+	// If the discovery file config contains authentication credentials
 	if kubeconfigutil.HasAuthenticationCredentials(config) {
 		klog.V(1).Info("[discovery] Using authentication credentials from the discovery file for validating TLS connection")
 
 		// Use the discovery file config for starting the join process
 		kubeconfig = config
 
-		// We should ensure that all the authentication info are embedded in config file, so everything will work also when
+		// We should ensure that all the authentication info is embedded in config file, so everything will work also when
 		// the kubeconfig file will be stored in /etc/kubernetes/boostrap-kubelet.conf
 		if err := kubeconfigutil.EnsureAuthenticationInfoAreEmbedded(kubeconfig); err != nil {
 			return nil, errors.Wrap(err, "error while reading client cert file or client key file")
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ func ValidateConfigInfo(config *clientcmdapi.Config, clustername string) (*clien
 		return nil, err
 	}
 
-	var currentCluster = kubeconfigutil.GetClusterFromKubeConfig(kubeconfig)
+	currentCluster := kubeconfigutil.GetClusterFromKubeConfig(kubeconfig)
 	klog.V(1).Infof("[discovery] Created cluster-info discovery client, requesting info from %q\n", currentCluster.Server)
 
 	var clusterinfoCM *v1.ConfigMap
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ func ValidateConfigInfo(config *clientcmdapi.Config, clustername string) (*clien
 				klog.Warningf("[discovery] Could not access the %s ConfigMap for refreshing the cluster-info information, but the TLS cert is valid so proceeding...\n", bootstrapapi.ConfigMapClusterInfo)
 				return true, nil
 			}
-			klog.V(1).Infof("[discovery] Error reading the %s ConfigMap, will try again: [%v]\n", bootstrapapi.ConfigMapClusterInfo, err)
+			klog.V(1).Infof("[discovery] Error reading the %s ConfigMap, will try again: %v\n", bootstrapapi.ConfigMapClusterInfo, err)
 			return false, nil
 		}
 		return true, nil
@@ -119,11 +119,11 @@ func ValidateConfigInfo(config *clientcmdapi.Config, clustername string) (*clien
 		return kubeconfig, nil
 	}
 
-	var refreshedCluster = kubeconfigutil.GetClusterFromKubeConfig(refreshedBaseKubeConfig)
+	refreshedCluster := kubeconfigutil.GetClusterFromKubeConfig(refreshedBaseKubeConfig)
 	currentCluster.Server = refreshedCluster.Server
 	currentCluster.CertificateAuthorityData = refreshedCluster.CertificateAuthorityData
 
-	klog.V(1).Infof("[discovery] Synced server and CA from the %s ConfigMap so we have got the latest information", bootstrapapi.ConfigMapClusterInfo)
+	klog.V(1).Infof("[discovery] Synced Server and CertificateAuthorityData from the %s ConfigMap", bootstrapapi.ConfigMapClusterInfo)
 	return kubeconfig, nil
 }
 

cmd/kubeadm/app/util/kubeconfig/kubeconfig.go

@@ -171,11 +171,8 @@ func EnsureAuthenticationInfoAreEmbedded(config *clientcmdapi.Config) error {
 
 // getCurrentAuthInfo returns current authInfo, if defined
 func getCurrentAuthInfo(config *clientcmdapi.Config) *clientcmdapi.AuthInfo {
-	if config == nil || config.CurrentContext == "" {
-		return nil
-	}
-
-	if len(config.Contexts) == 0 || config.Contexts[config.CurrentContext] == nil {
+	if config == nil || config.CurrentContext == "" ||
+		len(config.Contexts) == 0 || config.Contexts[config.CurrentContext] == nil {
 		return nil
 	}
 	user := config.Contexts[config.CurrentContext].AuthInfo

cmd/kubeadm/app/util/kubeconfig/kubeconfig_test.go

@@ -206,12 +206,12 @@ func TestGetCurrentAuthInfo(t *testing.T) {
 			expected: false,
 		},
 		{
-			name:     "no CurrentContext object 1",
+			name:     "no CurrentContext object",
 			config:   &clientcmdapi.Config{CurrentContext: "kubernetes"},
 			expected: false,
 		},
 		{
-			name: "no CurrentContext object ",
+			name: "CurrentContext object with bad contents",
 			config: &clientcmdapi.Config{
 				CurrentContext: "kubernetes",
 				Contexts:       map[string]*clientcmdapi.Context{"NOTkubernetes": {}},
@@ -227,7 +227,7 @@ func TestGetCurrentAuthInfo(t *testing.T) {
 			expected: false,
 		},
 		{
-			name: "no AuthInfo object 1",
+			name: "no AuthInfo object",
 			config: &clientcmdapi.Config{
 				CurrentContext: "kubernetes",
 				Contexts:       map[string]*clientcmdapi.Context{"kubernetes": {AuthInfo: "kubernetes"}},
@@ -235,7 +235,7 @@ func TestGetCurrentAuthInfo(t *testing.T) {
 			expected: false,
 		},
 		{
-			name: "no AuthInfo object 2",
+			name: "AuthInfo object with bad contents",
 			config: &clientcmdapi.Config{
 				CurrentContext: "kubernetes",
 				Contexts:       map[string]*clientcmdapi.Context{"kubernetes": {AuthInfo: "kubernetes"}},
@@ -244,7 +244,7 @@ func TestGetCurrentAuthInfo(t *testing.T) {
 			expected: false,
 		},
 		{
-			name: "authInfo",
+			name: "valid AuthInfo",
 			config: &clientcmdapi.Config{
 				CurrentContext: "kubernetes",
 				Contexts:       map[string]*clientcmdapi.Context{"kubernetes": {AuthInfo: "kubernetes"}},